Could be better.
First off, for the sake of accuracy: The Allegory of the Cave is from Plato's Republic (Book 7; 514a-520a).
Other than that the movie wasn't half bad, I just wish you had some sound in there to go with it and that annoying "Trial Version" wasn't there.
I recommend to wait until you have a full version or something that doesn't put a water mark on your work before submitting it to a global audience.